Here’s Mye! With the promised catch-up verse. In the end I’ve done only the first of these three verses in the ‘difficult’ style I had in mind, but I’m not sure if it works. Let me know what you think after reading them.
“It is finished, complete
At last. Dark diminished, fear
Is now past. With goodly feat
Peace is replete.” She sheds a tear.
“I am defeated too.”
She sighs, her spirit broken.
“Used by mightier than you,
Or I. E’en words that were spoken,
By myself drove you deep,
Deep inside the caves, wherein,
The seed was sown which would sweep
Out from the work One would begin.”
Thanks for reading,